I think you made a mistake with the weather duck.
I think you made a mistake with the weather duck.
Oh no, what happened? :-O
All your jokes fell flat this time. Try harder.
haha okay I shall!
You need to speak up, but otherwise this is very, very good.
Thanks... I will.
I hope to get better.
Thanks again for your feedback
The voice work is messy. Pretty hard to hear most of it, and the last line is kinda flat and silly.
Thanks for taking the time to watch. I'll check out the audio levels. Cheers, Danny
The comedy's decent, and so is the voicework. Just a bit more work on the lip flaps, and you'd really have something nice.
haha lip flaps? What's that? :-O
Thanks and yup gonna work on the art and get it better.
Extremely simple, but in a good way.
Thank you!
I would say that a good Madness cartoon is characterized by wide-angle shots of the whole room, and having everyone moving at once. This cartoon is really hurt by the constant closeups, and it sort of seems like everyone is standing still waiting to shot.
Will be better
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Joined on 10/28/17