You deliver the lines very well, but put together it all feels kind of inorganic. You should try overlapping the laughtrack with the tail end of the punchlines, especially the sound effect at the end of that anal probe joke.
You deliver the lines very well, but put together it all feels kind of inorganic. You should try overlapping the laughtrack with the tail end of the punchlines, especially the sound effect at the end of that anal probe joke.
The voice work is messy. Pretty hard to hear most of it, and the last line is kinda flat and silly.
Thanks for taking the time to watch. I'll check out the audio levels. Cheers, Danny
Very good, as usual. The characters saying 'Oz' instead of 'God' got really weird, though. Made me wonder if I was hearing things.
That got pretty funny, and kept me surprised, but it was too short.
Well, I thought it was underwhelming, but you did what you set out to do, I guess.
Outstanding. I think something's a little off with the audio encoding - the main singer is mostly in my right ear, for some reason - but otherwise, good animation, good parody, good singers.
The comedy's decent, and so is the voicework. Just a bit more work on the lip flaps, and you'd really have something nice.
haha lip flaps? What's that? :-O
Thanks and yup gonna work on the art and get it better.
The joke is very good, and so is the delivery, but of the things that YOU did, there's nothing to recommend. It's well synced to the audio, I suppose, and a simple artstyle isn't a bad fit for the joke in question, but it doesn't seem like a lot of effort went into this.
Fun, cartoony, and weirdly gripping. This kinda reminds me of those old children's adventure games, Freddy Fish or Putt Putt, in a very good way.
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